If our students always write like this:
On the first day, we met our class teacher Mr Wong, we thought he would be very strict to us. After one week, we found Mr Wong was very nice! We like this secondary school and we like to be in 1A. This is a good school and 1A is very good . The teachers in this school are very kind and nice and our classmates are also kind, friendly and nice . We like each other very much.
As their English teachers, will we be able to teach them to use some tools such as online dictionaries and thesauruses to help out with their difficulties of limited word choices?
Once we use the thesaurus to check the most frequently used words: nice, good and like, we can pick some words from it and then go to other dictionaries and check their meaning in detail. This action is to find support from the dictionary that the word we choose can be swapped with the original one. Let's try to improve the range of vocabulary in a student composition as followed:
On the first day, we met our class teacher Mr Wong, we thought he would be very strict to us. After one week, we found Mr Wong was very nice! We like (Can be kept) this secondary school and we like love to be in 1A. This is a good an excellent school and 1A is very good wonderful . The teachers in this school are very kind and nice likable and our classmates are also kind, friendly and nice sweet. We like cherish each other very much.